Silvertip Mountain The Mountian

Sorry my posts are so short, third person is sorta new to me, sorry and anyone else can still join in. 

Atari took a deep breath of the cold crisp winter air, it burned her nostrils and throat as it went down. She held the cold air in, as she was holding her breath, she could feel her heart beat. Steam came rushing out as she exhaled, she watched as the steam went off into the sky. Atari went on walking when the steam was no longer visible. It wasn't long before she heard a voice call her name. It sounded semi familiar, Atari noticed a wolf approaching her. It was Krypton. Atari had hoped to run into her, she needed to apologize for her actions back at the meet. She had spoke first when asked about her history, she should have known better. As Krypton came closer Atari noticed her hackles were up, she didn't take this as a threat. Atari owed the female the respect she deserved, and a lot of it

She put her tail between her legs and lowered her height, as well as her hackles. They weren't raised to much to begin with but this was purely out of respect. She put her head down and answered to her "Yes, Krypton? How may I help you" Atari said in a calm tone. She wondered if she showed to much respect to the female. Krypton was two ranks ahead of her, she would have been four but Atari was promoted theta a couple days back. She liked her rank, though it would be nice to rise more but that would have to wait.