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Kinra couldn't help but grin at the mistakes the two were making. Before saying anything she waited to see if Brandy wasn't hurt from her missed attack. It all looked fine so now it was time for the Knight to step in. "Good tries you two, it seems you understood the basics. However, from what I see you both have much more to learn." Watching them reminded her when young pups where sparing for the first time. Except Aduin and Brandy were more experienced compared to a pup. That really meant that all they needed was more practice and advice and they would continue to improve.

She decided to start by giving them advice that would help them improve. "Aduin, I notice you close your eyes too often when both attacking and avoiding. Try keeping your eyes partly open as if you were squinting, you are going to want to know what your opponent will do next so you need to keep an eye on them." She said aiming to correct his main problem. Seeing everything show allow him to attack better and avoid so that was really all he needed to work on for now.

Then she turned towards Brandy. "Brandy, your strategy was good and can work. Just remember every move can also be used against you. Repeating a move leaves you open to a counterattack. An experienced fighter would have tried to jump at you after a feign and it would be you that would be caught off guard. You want to keep your opponents guessing or they will turn the fight against you." 

With all that said she felt like the only thing they could do now is practice. "I suggest that you two find some time to practice together. If there are no questions then today's practice is over."