August 24, 2013, 12:33 AM
ooc: whoops, haha, I made it sound like Kisu woulda killed Koontz. He was basically suggesting (to himself) something like a "it's not safe to go alone," not: "I'm going to eat her aliiiive!" ....ha. I am going to make a small edit, even though it won't change the story
As she narrowed her icicle tinted eyes, they seemed to glow. It made her look even more majestic. A cutting tone from her made him assume that she took his comment in a condescending way; but, then she inquired why he had said what he did. He lifted his eyebrows in mild amusement.
He held eye contact as he responded. "You could get hurt being alone, and, though I appreciated the food and you saving my life, you needn't take care of me like I am of your pack."
As she narrowed her icicle tinted eyes, they seemed to glow. It made her look even more majestic. A cutting tone from her made him assume that she took his comment in a condescending way; but, then she inquired why he had said what he did. He lifted his eyebrows in mild amusement.
He held eye contact as he responded. "You could get hurt being alone, and, though I appreciated the food and you saving my life, you needn't take care of me like I am of your pack."
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The door to December - by Koontz - August 23, 2013, 10:02 AM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 23, 2013, 10:48 AM
RE: The door to December - by Koontz - August 23, 2013, 11:09 AM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 23, 2013, 11:52 AM
RE: The door to December - by Koontz - August 23, 2013, 02:24 PM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 23, 2013, 03:49 PM
RE: The door to December - by Koontz - August 23, 2013, 07:19 PM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 23, 2013, 10:42 PM
RE: The door to December - by Koontz - August 24, 2013, 12:14 AM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 24, 2013, 12:33 AM
RE: The door to December - by Koontz - August 24, 2013, 10:16 AM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 26, 2013, 02:02 PM
RE: The door to December - by Koontz - August 27, 2013, 09:55 AM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 28, 2013, 04:27 PM
RE: The door to December - by Koontz - August 29, 2013, 09:29 AM
RE: The door to December - by Kisu - August 29, 2013, 10:04 AM