Emberwood here it's never ending

Dawn wasn't stupid, and noticed the way the woman spoke of her pack. Her brow furrowed, and she paused a moment before responding.  "even if you see yourself as separate from her pack, how do you think they will react when they learn that others employ you? I'm not looking to make enemies of other packs by buying out their members." She tended to avoid offering others advice, as she hated to come across as being stuck-up. But something was wrong with this woman and her attitude towards packs, something that irked her. "holding a rank implies loyalty. you harm a pack by not offering that simple service, by hunting and serving them." She had been raised to see the pack as a whole, where all most work and provide. This woman went against that, something that didn't sit well with her.