Horizon Ridge Come Sail Away
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Ooc — Mary Ellen
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I usually try to disregard grammar mistakes, but, since you asked, I'd be more than happy to look it over for potential mistakes. I'll send you a PM when I'm done with my post. :-)


Julooke couldn't really understand, either, why someone would tell a wolf they loved them when they knew they were taken. A slight sense of understanding became her when Thistle explained Ragnar had not always been a long-term relationship kind of wolf. Still... It's very disrespectful of your relationship for her to take the liberty of telling him that. If she was any kind of pack mate, she would have respected their relationship, no matter her feelings. On top of personal disrespect, it makes for pack conflicts, too. And that was never good.

Julooke laughed along with her friend, happy she was able to cheer her up a little. She nodded, I'll keep my ears open, she responded. When her friend asked if she was doing some self-study, she nodded. I've been trying to identify the ones we've talked about, like Bergamot. It was pretty easy to find because of its purple petals. I practiced smashing them on a rock to get the oil from them. At first, I used my paw, but the oil just got all over it. Then I tried putting a rock on top and smashing it, and that worked, but how would I get the oil from the rock to the wound, though? she asked. She hadn't been able to figure that part out.


Messages In This Thread
Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 09, 2014, 11:56 AM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 09, 2014, 09:12 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 10, 2014, 09:56 AM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 12, 2014, 06:57 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 15, 2014, 10:09 AM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 16, 2014, 08:01 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 17, 2014, 12:49 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 18, 2014, 09:30 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 18, 2014, 09:35 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 19, 2014, 03:59 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 19, 2014, 11:33 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 21, 2014, 11:53 AM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 21, 2014, 01:04 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 22, 2014, 06:22 AM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 23, 2014, 03:19 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 23, 2014, 05:34 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 23, 2014, 05:59 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 23, 2014, 08:22 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 23, 2014, 08:27 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 25, 2014, 08:45 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - June 26, 2014, 10:03 AM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - June 29, 2014, 01:22 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - July 01, 2014, 09:41 AM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Julooke - July 03, 2014, 08:59 PM
RE: Come Sail Away - by Thistle Cloud - July 05, 2014, 01:03 PM

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