Blacktail Deer Plateau pull me out of the wake [m]

I think I understood what we're doing right... if not I fix yes. >_>

As Saena slipped off into the underbrush, Mordecai lingered for a few moments to give the deer a scrutinizing study. Once he was certain that she would make it past them without giving them an idea of what she was doing, he moved to flank them from the other side, thinking their plan to be something of a funneling action. He moved quietly and quickly, skirting much lower on the grade where Saena had gone higher, before coming back up to level himself off.

From the angle he paused at, he did not readily ascertain where Saena had gone until he saw a moment of sterling in the wintry foliage. He almost missed it, if not for the fact that it moved spry and swift. He fell into position at once to match her own, his body held low to the ground as they began to zero in on the roaming ungulates. Continuing to let her have the lead, he waited for her to spring into action and to put their plan to the test.