March 24, 2015, 04:37 PM
Osprey was amused and kept smiling all the way through the story. Shiv reminded her of a magpie she had met in the plateau once and, which had surprised her with the ability to talk and even have a touch of intelligence too. She chuckled at "very cool wolf", "dancing with the crafting bears", "tummy ache" and "the nerd of the pack". The story itself might be lacking in a distinct plot-line, well-shaped out character depth and a lot of other things, but there was something that eve the most elaborate story-tellers sometimes didn't possess. A touch of personality, making this simple tale original. It was so Charon through and through - the expressions, the adventures that both he and his heroine enjoyed and she didn't find it that hard to believe that there was a "nerd of the pack" somewhere among the Bay's ranks too. There was also a moral about true friendship to learn from.
In the end - even though there was a lot of room for improvement in the future, Charon's story had been nice, kept her focused and making her forget the aching paws. That said quite a lot about one tale. She even wanted to tell, if he knew that he was adorable, but decided against it. You could tell this to a little kid or a grown-up, but not for a boy his age. It would offend him now. "So, do you know another tale about Shiv's and Leyno's adventures together?" she asked him curiously. "Because you did well and I want to know more."
In the end - even though there was a lot of room for improvement in the future, Charon's story had been nice, kept her focused and making her forget the aching paws. That said quite a lot about one tale. She even wanted to tell, if he knew that he was adorable, but decided against it. You could tell this to a little kid or a grown-up, but not for a boy his age. It would offend him now. "So, do you know another tale about Shiv's and Leyno's adventures together?" she asked him curiously. "Because you did well and I want to know more."
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Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 06, 2015, 04:11 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 09, 2015, 07:18 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 10, 2015, 05:24 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 11, 2015, 12:27 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 11, 2015, 01:44 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 11, 2015, 02:24 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 15, 2015, 03:53 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 17, 2015, 07:20 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 18, 2015, 02:59 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 19, 2015, 07:52 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 19, 2015, 01:33 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 19, 2015, 04:57 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 20, 2015, 04:43 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 21, 2015, 07:48 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 22, 2015, 02:15 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 23, 2015, 07:40 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 23, 2015, 10:45 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 24, 2015, 02:09 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 24, 2015, 04:37 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 31, 2015, 02:26 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 31, 2015, 03:02 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 31, 2015, 03:27 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 31, 2015, 04:36 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 31, 2015, 04:44 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - March 31, 2015, 05:23 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - March 31, 2015, 06:48 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - April 02, 2015, 03:57 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - April 06, 2015, 02:49 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - April 06, 2015, 04:18 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - April 06, 2015, 04:29 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - April 07, 2015, 04:18 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - April 08, 2015, 08:44 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - April 08, 2015, 03:06 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - April 09, 2015, 10:34 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - April 09, 2015, 12:20 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - April 09, 2015, 03:38 PM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - April 10, 2015, 10:06 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Charon - April 13, 2015, 10:15 AM
RE: Somewhere in the darkness shines a little light on a blue horizon - by Osprey - April 16, 2015, 04:40 PM