Redtail Rise A rose by any other name
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The first bracketed OOC shouldn't have the slash.  Other than that, it's fine!

      The newlyweds had descended the ridge with a fervent excitement.  After finally tying the knot, there  was only one last thing to do... tell absolutely everybody about it.  Reek was ready to blab and flap off at the mouth to anyone who was willing to listen to him spout his goopey drivel... love does funny things to a man.  Obviously, the first to tell was the leader of the rise, Saena, whom Reek was sure would take the news well, however, he could understand Wynter's initial apprehensions: he was nervous himself.  

      "A little," he confirmed with an affectionate bump from his side.  There was no doubt in his mind that Saena would be happy for the two... however, their future plans may not been seen in the same light.  A fledgling pack may not be able to support little mouths to feed.

      Upon nearing the border around where Reek thought he would find @Saena, he lifted his muzzle to the air and howled for her.  Dropping to his haunches beside Wynter, he gave her a quick, reassuring nudge.  "I'm so excited Wyn. You have no idea!"
Messages In This Thread
A rose by any other name - by Wynter Wolf - May 03, 2015, 11:02 AM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Reek - May 03, 2015, 12:53 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Saēna - May 04, 2015, 05:55 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Wynter Wolf - May 04, 2015, 06:16 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Reek - May 04, 2015, 07:03 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Saēna - May 04, 2015, 07:27 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Wynter Wolf - May 04, 2015, 07:36 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Reek - May 04, 2015, 07:53 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Saēna - May 04, 2015, 08:04 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Reek - May 04, 2015, 08:27 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Wynter Wolf - May 04, 2015, 08:45 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Saēna - May 11, 2015, 08:54 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Reek - May 13, 2015, 04:36 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Wynter Wolf - May 21, 2015, 03:37 PM
RE: A rose by any other name - by Saēna - May 24, 2015, 10:20 AM