Tormented Tarns spiders in your hair, spiders everywhere

Took some liberties in describing her. Tell me if something is not okay. :)

Factitious was her expression, barely containing the hair-trigger response of a nasty temperament. Careful. Your face will stay like like that. It was hilarious to see her so riled. He wasn't trying to upset her, but now that he has...How could he ignore the chance to hound her further into annoyance? Chances like this did not come often. And maybe if he's lucky, he'll spur her into violence. He so did love to bludgeon another. Tatsuya was not above torturing loners, but again, he leaves the ball in her court. Ever the perfect gentleman. Not.
INDENTHe mimicked her impartial gaze; one who surveys the strengths of an ally...or the weaknesses of an enemy. I wonder which you are. She was stout in structure with common features of a female. Her midriff did not taper as much as those with tinier builds. Her limbs were substantial; muscular enough to support her heft. Triangular distaff face with inlaid pale yellow eyes; framed by tufts of honey and ivory. Her pelt was shaggy in texture, resembling swaying fields of golden wheat. Overall, a beauty with uncommon traits.
INDENT“I've seen enough of both to last me two lifetimes,” came his dry retort, motioning down to his gritty lower half. Would it come as a surprise if spiders were nesting in his fur? Or any other insect for that matter? Urge to bathe vigorously rising. “You...smell relatively new.” That she did. Was she an outsider having stumbled upon the Teekon Wilds just as he once had?