Blackfeather Woods Howl at the border

Your post is great, but I just want to clarify that in terms of wolf behavior making eye contact is a sign of challenge and uplifting rather than confidence. I don't want you to change anything, but Oli might want to keep eye contact to the minimum if he wants to make a good impression ;)

The caller was bold and decided to make eye contact with the young Gamma. Too much confidence for his own sake, and so Damien stared back with severity. "You better look away before I pull your eyes out, loner" growled Damien as he raised his tail dominantly.

"What do you know about this pack?" he asked with his own deep voice, "And why join us?"

This was Damien's very first interview with a potential recruit, and he did not know exactly how to handle it, but he went with his gut, and with all he'd learned with mother and Burke about keeping revealing information to the minimum.