Blacktail Deer Plateau i just cannot even
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Stories were meant to be shared with others and if they made the time spent listening worthwhile, then the story had achieved it's goal. Bazi's amazement of her skills flattered her a little, but she didn't think that the tale was something extraordinary. Now that she had told it, she could find numerous flaws in the plotline and the choice of words and characters. Osprey could improve here and there, refine the various lines and edges, make it more grand. However - you needed to know, where to stop, otherwise editting could turn out to be a neverending process.

"You are the first to hear it and don't forget that this is dedicated to you," she said and winked. Stories were good gifts in her opinion. Especially if you came up with them yourself. "Haven't had a chance yet, but maybe someday," Osprey replied.
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i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 04, 2014, 10:48 AM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - April 07, 2014, 03:47 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 07, 2014, 04:14 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - April 08, 2014, 01:46 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 09, 2014, 02:12 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - April 12, 2014, 02:01 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 12, 2014, 04:46 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - April 14, 2014, 12:34 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 15, 2014, 06:06 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - April 21, 2014, 03:00 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 21, 2014, 03:32 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - April 22, 2014, 02:47 AM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 28, 2014, 03:35 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - April 28, 2014, 04:39 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - April 30, 2014, 04:23 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - May 02, 2014, 07:08 AM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - May 02, 2014, 03:53 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - May 03, 2014, 12:56 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - May 05, 2014, 02:52 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - May 07, 2014, 02:43 PM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - May 11, 2014, 09:40 AM
RE: i just cannot even - by Osprey - May 16, 2014, 02:20 AM
RE: i just cannot even - by Bazi - May 18, 2014, 06:32 AM