Greatwater Lake For bruises, asses and handclaps

Wanderlust had gripped her again, and the female foundherself on the other side of the mountain range. She had never been here before, but while in the foothills hadseen a wide flatland stretching in front of her. She had meant only to explore Little Goat mountain, but had ended up here. She might as well make use of the time she had here. She had 'feasted' on a hare while home, and was not yet hungry. 

It was then she noticed the female stagger and collapse into the lake, drinking greedily. Minna approached hurriedly, this one looked ill. She trotted to a halt a few meters from the female, chuffing in greeting.

Hi! Could be possibly forward date this? :)