Swiftcurrent Creek Grant me Mercy please

Just a tiny, trivial nitpick, but Jace wouldn't be able to tell that she was laughing at him on the inside. Don't worry about changing your post. :)

"It's all in your head, Jace. I don't believe what you're talking about even exists. Everybody is responsible for their own actions. If you kill somebody, you are responsible. Not some made-up bullshit about how you have some hidden demon inside you." As for his father, Fox didn't really care what kind of a wolf he was. He wasn't around, so it didn't matter. If Jace killed one of his own, that would be on him, and him alone. No amount of pleading insanity would work in his favor. From what Fox had seen, Jace was perfectly sane.

"Is that all that's bugging you?" she asked, wondering if there were other things on the dark wolf's mind. Fox would never be a terrible personable leader. She just wasn't that kind of wolf. However, she did understand the value of listening. It just meant that whoever was talking wasn't going to get any kind of special treatment.