Greatwater Lake When remembering a life lost

i was told it is my post. Someone suggested rounds, and though im not quite totally sure how that works i suppose my post now will begin the first round. Me and Olive had an idea that Dakarai would submit and beg BFW to inflict the punishment on him and leave Olive alone since she merely trespassed, does anyone have an issue with that? Im not trying to be controlling, and i didnt realize i PP'd its just that me and olive though that there was a laid out plot between me,Abraxas,Nemesis, and Olive which was ruined when Olive went ovr the borders (i didnt think about that changed the whole thing XD). Im sorry if i offended anyone, i wasnt trying to be difficult or avoid punshment for Dak.

Dakarai's breath caught as Nemesis and another showed up, threatening him and his wife. His instincts still said fight, fight or his children and his wife, for his pride and his hatred for these incredibly cruel wolves. Yet as even more wolves showed up he felt his resolve crumbling and he crouched down squitning his eyes shut and curling his tail beneath his limbs. Vivid blue eyes looked up toward Nemesis as he cowered beneath her and he spoke "I am ready to take my punishment, just please leave Olive alo-" his words were cut off as Nemesis launched herself at him, her jaws snapping at his throat. Dakarai stumbled backward, though the woman's fangs still slashed a nasty gash from the side of his throat to his shoulder. He yelped and stumbled backward into one of the male's feeling fangs slash at him from behind as well.


With a shriek he rolled onto his belly and shouted "I submit! I take my punishment!" his voice roared desperately as he squinted his eyes shut, knowing that if they attacked him in this position he was finished. Locating Nemesis with panicked eyes he found her and whimpered "Do what you wish with me, just please leave Olive alone. She only trespassed she had no ill intentions to your brotherhood!" he pleaded with the woman.