you do slow burns

it really does seem lackluster, you put that eloquently, :D I'm sorry to with trying to create the pack and then this past week was taken up by my wife's dog show and having to put appointments in for the week I missed with our family loss My heart wasn't in this one, though I wanted it to be...
So lets end it here and take it in in the packlands :D

Ferdie Von Pelt paced the rocks face looking upward with the rabbit still hanging in his jaws. He snuffed loudly seeing no immediately obvious way up. He returned to Ame's side his tail drooping in defeat but spending time with her was time well spent no matter when he did with it. He gently touched his head to her shoulder before setting the rabbit down on her paws.

Darkness loomed around them like a thick blanket, and he frowned looking around the humidity hinted at rain though nothing fell from the sky yet. Let's den here for the night and try again in the morning I'm sure in the light of a new day things will have a better perspective

Ferdie's eyes swept over her form then up along the rock that halted their progress, he found himself comparing Ame to the mountain, full of surprises and yet holding a grace and beauty all her own. She seemed one with the mountain ever did he feel blessed she came with him. He was sure to learn much from her yet.