Blacktail Deer Plateau Errors in my bread

taltos was not surprised to find that peregrine was not wishing to mimick what he had done; he nodded his cheek against the grass, a sated light in his eyes. i do not need reciprocation, peregrine, lasher murmured. i need only what you will grant me. his was a reverent lust, redemption through pleasing the flesh of the one who had chosen him for such. he would serve the devil in whatever capacity was wished, though the desire was there for more intimacy.

his teeth flashed in a grin at the panther's suggestion, but he said nothing more, content to look upon peregrine, to feast his eyes there and satiate the detailed need of self for the visualization of ardor.

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