Dawnlark Plains Anybody there?

Loir had noticed a male then appear, but she was happy once the female had decided to give her a second chance. Loir was great at hunting! She knew she'd be able to do that.
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Loir walked along the plain, sniffing for potential prey. It was summer, slightly cold, but she didn't mind. Just then, one thing caught her eye: a rabbit. Loir crouched low and began sneaking up on the rabbit, not caring if she was doing something completely odd. If I can catch this rabbit, then I'll be a member of the pack! She thought, and she began feeling confident. Loir wouldn't let her possible chance of becoming a Morningside wolf fade away, so she had to kill this rabbit. Once Loir was close enough, she pounced on the rabbit and grabbed its neck, ending its life with a killing bite. Loir then picked up the rabbit and began trotting over to Aditya and Dawn with the rabbit dangling in her maw. She placed the rabbit at their paws, hoping for approval. I managed to catch a rabbit! Loir said, cheering up a little.

Would she get accepted?