Felltree Marsh show, never tell

dalia had seen the man from a distance, her gaze steadied on him as she continued along. he'd made some serious looks at her, she'd noticed, but he had suddenly looked really disappointed. dalia wondered what she'd done wrong, if anything, and decided it didn't matter. at that point, she assumed he wouldn't interact with her but, soon enough, she heard him calling out. 

the young girl slowed, gaze settling on him again. "hello," she echoed, pausing where she stood, ears flicking towards him, "are you okay?"