No that's perfect, that's exactly the reaction I was expecting from Jinx :)
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Keith wasn't trying to be rude holding the queen's gaze, but he was used to be on a higher rank than anyone except for his father so he did it without thinking of the consequences. The queen reacted fiercely to it and stated he was a mere peasant which he didn't like at all, but knowing that he wasn't in his reign anymore he shifted his eyes to the ground reluctantly. "Forgive me, my lady, I didn't mean to be rude in any way.." he was determined to be accepted to the pack, so he'd submit to Jinx if that's what it'd take.
Sitri and the queen listened to the prince story and he noticed they weren't dazzled by his abilities, maybe he was being too modest? He was more than just capable of being the leader of the pack, but he wasn't gonna tell the queen that. "I assure you, my queen, that if you accept me into your ranks you'll not be disappointed.. I offer my loyalty and my devotion to you. I'd be glad to show myself worthy of you but if you don't want me I'll understand, it is your decision only.." he finished with a bow and sat back on his haunches.
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The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 05, 2014, 04:44 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 05, 2014, 05:01 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 05, 2014, 06:12 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 06, 2014, 09:21 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 09, 2014, 10:53 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 09, 2014, 03:04 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 10, 2014, 10:13 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 11, 2014, 11:42 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Jinx - July 11, 2014, 11:54 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 12, 2014, 07:33 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 14, 2014, 03:10 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Jinx - July 16, 2014, 05:00 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 17, 2014, 10:04 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 19, 2014, 09:03 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Jinx - July 19, 2014, 09:49 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 20, 2014, 10:51 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 21, 2014, 08:22 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Jinx - July 23, 2014, 09:59 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 24, 2014, 09:45 AM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Sitri - July 24, 2014, 01:27 PM
RE: The Exiled Prince - by Bane - July 25, 2014, 02:17 PM