drenched in my pain again

That's okay! Nice cover, by the way. :D

"Rain," she answers with a tilt of her head. "What are you doing so close to the Spire?" She could take a guess that Star was just out relaxing and enjoying this nice Autumn day, seeing how she was trying to take a nap before Rain ran over her. "And I really am sorry for tripping over you. If there's anything I can do..." She lets her voice trail off, leaving the sentence open. She really does feel bad and foolish. She had been too lost in her emotions to pay attention. Never let emotion distract you, a voice from her past reminds her.