Sequoia Coast Ten Percent Luck
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Ooc — Dakotah
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I changed it so it makes more sense :3

The silence was broken by the paw steps of a wolf drawing closer and Kesuk turned her chocolate head to meet the yellow eyes of a scraggly grey wolf. But by the way she carried herself and the dark smile on her lips, Kesuk knew immediately that this wolf was high ranking. She was not impressed at all.

Her sapphire eyes glinted in the faint light below the trees and the feeling prickling in her fur told her that this meeting would be nothing like the pleasant conversation she had with Onyx.

Meeting yellow eyes with blue ones, she flicked her ears in greeting, but not giving her name right away.

"Hello, are you a member of Ankyra Sound?" she asked, almost without emotion. If the whole pack seemed as stuck up as this one, then she didn't really want anything to do with them.
Messages In This Thread
Ten Percent Luck - by Kesuk - January 15, 2015, 09:10 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Caiaphas - January 16, 2015, 03:01 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Kesuk - January 18, 2015, 04:43 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Caiaphas - January 18, 2015, 07:39 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Kesuk - January 19, 2015, 01:22 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Caiaphas - January 19, 2015, 08:53 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Kesuk - January 19, 2015, 10:32 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Caiaphas - January 20, 2015, 02:33 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Kesuk - January 23, 2015, 10:42 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Caiaphas - January 24, 2015, 08:17 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Kesuk - January 25, 2015, 06:07 PM
RE: Ten Percent Luck - by Caiaphas - January 26, 2015, 05:45 PM