Greatwater Lake Is it too late?

Ayana was shocked when she heart the mean words spoke about her. Suddenly she heard a quiet whisper in her head, as if her mind was talking to her again. But it was different, this time it was a male's voice. Her father's. You do not deseverve anything in this world, everything is still too good for you. You disgraced your pack, your family, me. And worst of all, you don't regret it. You would just do it again if necessary, do not lie to me about that, Ayana. Your name disgusts me. You disgust me, you bloody ... My daughter, HA! Leave, wolf. Leave, and never come back.

The golden wolf stared at Burke, terrified. He spoke just like her father. He hated her because she was a disappointment. Again.
"Burke, no! I never ... I could not come back, I just couldn't...", the female said. Her voice broke off and she stared at the ground. It was like she was bleeding inside and did not know what to do. All she did was stand there and cry. She was a failure. Even Burke thought that.

Sorry it's short, I'm super busy :(