Redhawk Caldera One Step Closer

Well... Mazi failed.  That was for sure.  She leaped in the air, feeling determination pulse through her, then something bad happened... all of her determine was lost, because she accidentally looked into the sun... which made her loose her focus of course.

Mazi plummeted to the ground with a yelp, ponding into the earth, feeling dirt fill her maw.  She stood up and arched her back, coughing all the dirt up with a shudder.  Then her focus locked back playfully back onto the spar.  She repositioned herself in a defense stance, waiting for Nadie’s attack, if Nadie did attack.

Your post is fine, we can wrap this spar up soon too if you want.  :)