Firefly Ravine Antsy Paws

Is it ok to push this forward a day?

Rana was lounging next to one of the bare trees near the border. The female wasn't planning on staying in the pack's territory most of the time. She'd already made a short trip to explore around the outside of their home, but hadn't gone far enough that it would take a full day to return. A small movement to her right drew her attention, she raised her head to see it better. Noticing that it was her friend pacing, she sat up and tilted her head. How did she not notice him sooner, if he was there the entire time?