Redhawk Caldera you don't fuckle with the shuckle

Thanks for the quick run-down! It's very helpful. :) For the sake of keeping things simple, I'll use the same formatting in my own posts when you and I roleplay together. And if you have any suggestions for things that I should be doing differently (you played Raven longer than I did, really!), please don't hesitate to let me know. <3

Raven grinned at the girl's mention of patrolling, proud that Towhee was growing up to be such a dedicated, hardworking member of the pack. What might have crippled or stunted the development of any other puppy -- or gotten it killed altogether -- had only made Towhee stronger, smarter, and better-equipped to deal with life's challenges. There was truly no force of nature more formidable than a Redhawk, especially one with any measure of odds to overcome, and every bit of that fire shone in those intelligent ember eyes that implored her now to come to the caldera.

"Of course," Raven said with a laugh, pulling herself to her feet and shaking loose bits of grass and debris from her coat. There were almost zero situations she could think of in which she would turn down a chance to hang out with one of her younger siblings. -A swim would actually be really nice right now. Race you?- Towhee was of the age now where she might just outrun her older sister, but Raven nevertheless enjoyed the opportunity for a little friendly competition.