Blacktail Deer Plateau Errors in my bread

I'm not really one for writing out erotic scenes, so if y'wanna ~allude~ and then fast forward, that might work best? :D

Lasher allowed Peregrine to nip at his ear for a moment before turning and planting his own lips against the Alpha male's throat. At the touch of his lips and teeth, the swarthy leader purred deep in his throat and his tail began to swing harder back and forth. He arched his neck slightly to give Lasher easier access while angling his own snout downward to nibble now at the tip of Lasher's ear.

For a few moments, they were caught up in the equivalent of a hot and heavy necking session before Peregrine slowly withdrew after a final, broad-tongued lick to the bridge of Lasher's muzzle. The Alpha male retreated into his own thoughts for a few beats, feeling his heartbeat picking up pace even as his thoughts raced and that pale, burning ring sailed in the sky like some strange omen.

"All right," Peregrine said softly, his voice husky. "I can't take it anymore." Swinging to fully face Lasher, the Alpha male cleared up any confusion by swiftly stating, "If the offer's still good, I want you to show me what you can do with that nimble tongue of yours," he said, breathless despite the dark stillness as the double entendre left his lips.