September 17, 2013, 02:52 PM
I know you wrote it as if she already left but, to be fair, Koontz and Yildun wouldn't necessarily just let her go, so I wrote this reply accordingly. Let me know if you have any concerns about this. :)
The Delta made it clear that he wanted Vilocity to leave. Although Koontz had been prepared to stick around and entertain their now unwelcome guest, she totally deferred to her subordinate's opinion on the matter. She touched her nose to his neck again, repeating her earlier promise: I've got your back.
"I'm going to have to ask—" Koontz began to say, firmly but tonelessly, when Vilocity cut her off and hurled insults at herself and Yildun. The young Alpha's eyes flashed in surprise, then darkened quickly as the haughty bitch accused them of trying to start a fight, rather than taking responsibility for her rudeness and apologizing for the misapprehension. Large as she was, she was nothing but an overgrown child, immature and uncouth as she tried to mock them.
The she-wolf huffed and turned her back, at which point Koontz lunged at it, aiming a warning bite square to Vilocity's exposed hindquarters to hasten her step. "Get away from my lands this instant," she warned loudly, giving Vilocity a narrow window of opportunity to flee.
Should she try to react or do anything besides leave as instructed, the Alpha fully intended to attack, this time with the intent to kill. She would not tolerate disrespect on her borders. And though she and Yildun were smaller, the two of them could certainly give Vilocity a run fo her money, at least long enough for the rest of the pack to arrive and tear her to shreds.
The Delta made it clear that he wanted Vilocity to leave. Although Koontz had been prepared to stick around and entertain their now unwelcome guest, she totally deferred to her subordinate's opinion on the matter. She touched her nose to his neck again, repeating her earlier promise: I've got your back.
"I'm going to have to ask—" Koontz began to say, firmly but tonelessly, when Vilocity cut her off and hurled insults at herself and Yildun. The young Alpha's eyes flashed in surprise, then darkened quickly as the haughty bitch accused them of trying to start a fight, rather than taking responsibility for her rudeness and apologizing for the misapprehension. Large as she was, she was nothing but an overgrown child, immature and uncouth as she tried to mock them.
The she-wolf huffed and turned her back, at which point Koontz lunged at it, aiming a warning bite square to Vilocity's exposed hindquarters to hasten her step. "Get away from my lands this instant," she warned loudly, giving Vilocity a narrow window of opportunity to flee.
Should she try to react or do anything besides leave as instructed, the Alpha fully intended to attack, this time with the intent to kill. She would not tolerate disrespect on her borders. And though she and Yildun were smaller, the two of them could certainly give Vilocity a run fo her money, at least long enough for the rest of the pack to arrive and tear her to shreds.
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in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 09, 2013, 05:52 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 10, 2013, 10:18 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 11, 2013, 12:07 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 11, 2013, 02:20 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 11, 2013, 07:36 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 11, 2013, 11:14 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 12, 2013, 11:25 AM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 12, 2013, 12:20 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 12, 2013, 08:42 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 13, 2013, 04:30 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 13, 2013, 04:58 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 13, 2013, 05:11 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Koontz - September 13, 2013, 07:58 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 13, 2013, 08:18 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 16, 2013, 11:42 AM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Koontz - September 16, 2013, 01:13 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 16, 2013, 08:02 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 17, 2013, 01:16 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Koontz - September 17, 2013, 01:25 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 17, 2013, 01:44 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Hawkeye - September 17, 2013, 02:23 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Koontz - September 17, 2013, 02:52 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Yildun - September 17, 2013, 07:03 PM
RE: in your darkest hour - by Koontz - September 24, 2013, 11:09 AM