Swiftcurrent Creek i'm not half the man i used to be

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She didn't feel too good that day. Growing had began to make her sickly health get better but still there were days when her tummy bothered her. She wouldn't have left the den at all if not for shrieking. Her brother's shrieking. Her ears went back as the sound gave her immediate anxiety, she didn't know why he was screaming but she wanted it to stop. She stood up and slowly left the den, following his scent and the sound and soon coming upon the sight of a stranger standing over her curled up brother. Immediately she ran forward and with all her small might tried to tackle the man away from her brother "No! Bad man!" she shrieked and tried to wedge herself between him and Zephyr.