Stone Circle heavy heart hitting under red light

Sela let out a groan, unheard to his own ears and drowned out by the cries of his sole sister. He was much more content then her, as he nosed his way toward a meal, hunger finally clawing at his tiny tummy. He could feel a warm bundle on his side, which he snuggled into. Happy and content, unable to hear the wailing of his sister, he slowly drifted into a milk induced nap.

what do you think? can we close this?