Kintla Flatlands Savage garden

Per the Guidebook's Quickstart guide, could you please write in third person past tense? Thanks! :)

Because of the level terrain, Peregrine saw the she-wolf long before she drew close enough to speak. His eyes followed her warily even as he continued chewing, though he didn't feel any particular apprehension. As she came closer, he could see that she was small and quite lovely. Her bright turquoise eyes were set into a cream face and she possessed a sylphlike physique.

"What do you mean?" he asked after swallowing, laying one paw possessively across his small vegetable harvest. He didn't intend to share with a stranger, even a pretty one.