Shadewood Paranoid

what is not good?
there is tentativeness in both his tone and step. he’d come across the other man by chance. seeing how their last meeting ended, he wasn’t to thrilled about the coincidence.
the yearling’s anxiety seemed to melt away as soon as he saw blood trickling down the ivory coat.
mio dio—! you are hurt? the awkward air came rushing back as soon as the question left his lips. what a pointless question. 
how did it happen?