Redtail Rise little known facts of strife

i would have been open to that, but honestly think i might have to reach out and see about deleting that one because typhon just made it impossible, lol! depending on ratio's response, i can wrap with my next.

the wild fur along his back raised in protest.

no, he commanded, losing his grip on reason, i will not bare my soul to you. i have done nothing to deserve your intervention. if you will not permit me my privacy, i will withdraw my tenure from redtail rise. he was so incensed that even if the bitan were to dismiss him, he was not certain he could share space with the man again.  even if he managed to repair the damage of whatever slight that ratio projected upon him, would it be enough to mend his future?

he thought of his hunt-brothers and felt something break in his chest.  acid in his throat, he turned to leave. convinced that the man would leave no room for discussion, he said, escort me to the borders, if you wish.