Is it Necessary?

I think it's ok, except that maybe you're describing too many possible actions instead of telling me what he actually did... So far I have his words and a snap to her chest? Please correct me if I'm wrong, this is like my first spar ever... :P

Many have been the ones to challenge Aella, all of them probably bigger than herself, but all of them had fallen, victims of her swift moves and agile strikes. She was an experienced warrior proven in open battle many times, she was an accomplished Amazon, so she knew better than to make the first move.

Aella would either wait until the male willingly submitted to her, or use his own weight and momentum against him. Back down, male! this is the last warning! the female growled now angrier than before. The insubordination of this male was getting the worst out of her, and she would't let this matter unattended. How did Aktaie let such a defying and gutsy male into the ranks? Was she out of her mind?

Her body grew bigger, her snarls deeper and her tail higher, the display of dominance wouldn't be mistaken by anyone who saw it, so why had the male decided to keep the insolence? Though Aella hoped he would submit with that, she knew it was unlikely, for her contender looked like he thought this was some kind of joke. Aella didn't want the spot, she wanted to either put the male in his place, or doom him to exile, for such boldness wasn't accepted in males within the Nereides.