The Sunspire Coming With News
I'd rather die with someone than let that person die before my eyes
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Should I switch the colors? Use the green for her speech and silver with everything else? Or is it fine the way it is?

At her alpha's greeting, Rain wags her tail excitedly. "Amekaze," she replies warmly. "It is good to be back."She takes a seat on the path as her legs start to shake, still not fully recovered. "There is much I have to tell you, but first I need you at the boarders. There is someone I need you to speak with, it's urgent,"she informs the alpha. "He will be able to explain the situation better than I can, for I do not completely understand it myself." Rain also feels to worn down to explain it all.

"I can tell you that the new pack, Ankyra Sound, is an enemy. They will attack any wolf near their boarders. They are a female dominant pack that use males as pets." She finds that Nishu's word 'pet' feels unusual on her tongue. "You can say our relations with them will always remain hostile."

Rain gets back up to her paws, a little wobbly."We should get going." She hurriedly turns back around making for the boarder. From the way her vision has started to flicker in and out, she will need to rest soon. They have to get to Nishu quickly before she collapses. Jumping back across the gap in the cliffs, her hindlegs fall short of the edge. Clawing at the side, she manages to get back up on the path,panting. Her neck wounds bleed more freely now, giving her even less time to get things situated.
Messages In This Thread
Coming With News - by Rain - December 10, 2014, 11:52 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 10, 2014, 10:48 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 11, 2014, 12:31 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 11, 2014, 09:24 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 11, 2014, 10:10 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 11, 2014, 11:09 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 12, 2014, 11:23 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Nishu Inte - December 12, 2014, 12:05 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 14, 2014, 03:18 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 14, 2014, 01:06 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Nishu Inte - December 14, 2014, 02:39 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 14, 2014, 09:58 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 15, 2014, 11:12 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Nishu Inte - December 15, 2014, 02:11 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 16, 2014, 09:57 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 17, 2014, 12:31 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Nishu Inte - December 17, 2014, 12:51 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 19, 2014, 01:22 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 19, 2014, 01:08 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Nishu Inte - December 19, 2014, 02:31 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 21, 2014, 07:53 PM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 27, 2014, 02:09 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Nishu Inte - December 27, 2014, 08:42 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - December 28, 2014, 02:55 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Rain - December 30, 2014, 01:14 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Nishu Inte - December 30, 2014, 06:48 AM
RE: Coming With News - by Amekaze - January 01, 2015, 10:24 PM