Silvertip Mountain Why don't you be you

Makui was tired.
he had kept up his weight fairly well, but still, he was thin and pushing himself too hard. He was eager to prove himself to Silvertip, Steady, and his other packmates. His paws roamed over the mountain with tiredness, as he headed for his favourite spot. His head was lowered in the summer heat, but he relentlessly climbed the mountainside. Finally, he approached- a stone ledge under which the land dropped away sharply, and was level with the sprawling tree-tops below. He loved the way the land spread out before him, the view down the mountain was stunning.

Slowly crumpling into a heap, he stretched his head forward and watched the landscape with gleaming eyes. Clouds stretched out along the sky, the sun shone. Makui sighed contentedly, closing his eyes and basking his thin frame in the sun. The mountin offered some shade, but neverless, it was warm, and Makui's breaths slowed as he tumbled into sleep.