March 18, 2023, 07:56 PM
wet sound of retreating feet.
one eye rolled back, and back, to follow, until white overtook red.
and then it closed.
black lump in the mire's throat - the mud swallowed her tighter.
the woman exhaled, thinking this scene through with a maddening adherence to belief, to rhythm drummed into her skull by a feverish hurt.
her voice rose bubbling from the mud-
a cackle.
it echoed not once, flat sound sunken into the mush and disease of fishblight mire.
and then it fell, to a repeating, pitched whine.
she would cry softly in the muck. small sounds of a bruised child.
one eye rolled back, and back, to follow, until white overtook red.
and then it closed.
black lump in the mire's throat - the mud swallowed her tighter.
the woman exhaled, thinking this scene through with a maddening adherence to belief, to rhythm drummed into her skull by a feverish hurt.
her voice rose bubbling from the mud-
a cackle.
it echoed not once, flat sound sunken into the mush and disease of fishblight mire.
and then it fell, to a repeating, pitched whine.
she would cry softly in the muck. small sounds of a bruised child.
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