Mudminnow River Eridanus
45 Posts
Ooc — Bees
Offline
#4
no, no, too round. this one's too long. she'd slaughter me if i gave her that! too grey. too-

the raven fussed with his slowly growing pile, oblivious to the observer.

could be less solid in color. why's this one red? too round, again, too- KRAK!!

yonder croaked and hopped back with flap of wings as if he'd just been the victim of a violent stabbing. his head swung and overshot the culprit several times, his eyes aimed too high- on about the seventh pass, he spotted it.

a weasel. he assumed. its head was low to the ground, and brown. with big earskin and black-tipped beak and oh father wind that's a wolf.

yonder went very, very still. if i don't move, it can't see me, he said to himself, standing starkly black against frost-tipped reeds.
Messages In This Thread
Eridanus - by Esma - November 12, 2023, 12:36 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Yonder - January 15, 2024, 04:50 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Esma - January 26, 2024, 01:43 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Yonder - February 03, 2024, 04:32 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Esma - February 07, 2024, 04:09 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Yonder - February 08, 2024, 04:21 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Esma - February 10, 2024, 04:10 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Yonder - February 11, 2024, 02:14 PM
RE: Eridanus - by Esma - February 25, 2024, 03:58 PM