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zoug did not say goodbye for he had no word of it. he planned to return unless some force of the earth prevented this.

and so he went only to @Sari, to speak in his newly mixed way.

at least four days would zoug be gone.

he found that @Candle had left the place of the tribe, for as he crouched outside the ravine later, repainting his face, his shoulders, his chest with blood, he discovered her trail moving far away.

zoug did not follow. his path lay opposite. 

the round place of no water and many stars. 

the man set out as evening fell.
italics: guttural shifts in tone (clan words)