Lost Creek Hollow tag you're it

You got a little bit of powerplay in your last paragraph there! You assumed Luke chased her, and continued to come closer even after she sat, but I never intended him to actually chase her at all hehe ;) In the future please be careful about the powerplay! I'm just going to skip over it this time. :D

His ruse was successful. She pivoted and ran, expecting that the tides had turned and he would be chasing her, but that had never been his intent. Just as quick as she showed him her back he spun and darted away again, no doubt alerting her to his one-eighty by the loud laughter that echoed off the trees.

"Gotta be quicker than that!" He hollered, and he in no way referred to her swift paws for she had kept pace with him and he could not discredit her speed. No, she had to think a bit quicker, to see through the tricks he was pulling. As his paws drummed through the hollow, his mind churned to come up with his next play. Supposing she did not catch him first!