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Ferdie waited for them to start to fish, he wondered briefly if they would go into the water or stand at the riverside; he had been instructed by Njal not to go in.
Seems like fishing was way to important around here for his taste. "You are kind mi'dear, I will watch and learn I promise and then I will bring to Fox the biggest fish I can." He did intend to watch them and he definitely intended on gifting Fox a fish one day, just not today.

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Ferdie had been invited to entertain the young wolves and so he shall share his story err.. a story. He cleared his throat and began. "There was once a land a the base of beautiful mountains, but it was divided.

There were wolves with light hearts and there were wolves with dark hearts, the Light hearted wolves had a Queen. She was a seductive wolf, the Queen, Alpha over all the packs in the light land, she was Alpha of the alpha’s and the alpha’s were to all follow her command, and by extension their packs.

The Dark hearted wolves had a king, but the king was seldom seen, so the dark hearted wolves did all run amuck causing stress and disaster.

Now it came to be that many wolves sought the Light Queens heart and she was willing to give it but to only one. The Dark King wolf was rejected as a suitor very quickly and the king became more recluse. That alone should have been cause for worry, but so engrossed in courting the queen none noticed not the dark hearted or the light hearted wolves.

There were a few wolves whom held the queens heart, most of them were wolves in her kingdom but one 'wolf' Ferdie spit out the last word with such distaste that it would make any listener wonder the origin of the story
"This one wolf claimed to be a neutral wolf, though the neutrals had no kingdom to claim or packs to offer.

As time went past the queen rejected all but two suitors a light hearted wolf alpha of a vibrant pack and the neutral wolf. Then one day with the light hearted wolf came to her and told her of his love she told him she loved him too but she had decided to mate with the neutral wolf, and so the light hearted wolf too was turned away, the queen had forsaken all her light-wolves in her kingdom in-favor of the 'pretender' neutral.

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It soon came to light that the neutral wolf was not a wolf at all; but a fae, a shape shifter, if you will, who's natural form was most 'human' like and finding this out she still did not reject him. The light wolf, her last suitor came forth and challenged the neutral 'non-wolf' for the right to be the queen wolfs mate. The neutral non-wolf laughed and refused the fight, he didn't' need to accept the challenge for he was not a wolf and so; not bound by wolf honor. The queen instead of rejecting the pretender claimed him her mate in wolf form before all her kingdom.

The neutral wolf then in private revealed a second wolf form to the light hearted suitor; he was none other then the dark wolf king and he had succeeded in bringing down the light kingdom.

The queen refused to listen enthralled by this neutral wolf, she allowed herself to be turned into a different form and married him as a human. They had a human child together and she forgot all about the wolves in her light kingdom.

It was not long after that, that a great famine and drought hit the land,

Everyone left, even she did.

The suitor waited the longest of all, hoping for the queen to return for she did promise she would. So he held on until he could not any longer, for he could not wait where there is no food or life."

Falling silent Ferdie lay his head upon the rock and watched the pair

edit: Wholly crap the spelling errors