Swiftcurrent Creek second times a charm.. right?

@Nightingale I placed her where he ran to with Bazi tell me if that not ok.

Ferdie limped back to where the whole thing started, the one voice he heard actually heard was nightingale, her voice had mimicked his and he smiled and then finally cried as he stared down at the fish that she had dropped that he hadn't seen. Guilt remorse, sadness and a broken heart all the feelings be had blocked and the ones that caused this out burst exploded from him them. He sobbed and lay down on the fish tucking it under his chin taking in her scent. He sobbed until his throat heaved and could no longer catch his breath and there were no more tears in his body.

Carefully he drew himself up and picked up the fish and carried it. He followed her trail having to pause every so often to catch his breath. By the time he found the small, grassy outcropping that hung right over Swiftcurrent Creek, and Nightingale was wasn't siffeling anymore but his eyes would be red rimmed.

He crawled up to Nightingale and lay down the fish before her licked her paws and then began to eat it carefully, offering her a troubled sad smile. he was asking for forgiveness hoping to get it from at least one wolf before his fate was decided by the alhpa. Their situations completely reversed now it was he who waiting to know wither he should lie or die or be banished.