New Family {mostly for BDP respoce, but any can read.}
<strong>here is a strange and bitter crop</strong>
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Ooc — Karmencita
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Would you mind lengthening your posts a little bit, so that I have a bit more to read and respond to? :) You could write a description of the time of day, how Fireblaze is feeling, what she thinks about Pura - it makes it more fun for me to react to you.

The dozing wolf burst from sleep like a furry Jack-in-a-Box, suddenly wide awake. The transition startled Pura, who scrambled backwards, tripped over his own tail, and half-fell into a sit. In the few seconds it took his breathing to return to normal, the grey pup studied the newcomer silently. He did most things silently, despite marked improvements to his speech. Pura just wasn't particularly chatty.

Fireblaze. She had a few ugly scars that he knew better than to draw attention to, and a wiry, boyish build. There was something wrong with one of her eyes, like the pupil had exploded, but the other was a pleasant blue. Pura shook his head at the invitation to play. "Hunt," he told her, hoping she was too new to turn him down. He wanted to venture into the forest, and technically needed someone to accompany him there.
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RE: New Family {mostly for BDP respoce, but any can read.} - by Pura - July 01, 2014, 02:58 AM