Greatwater Lake there with my crooked teeth

Does the 12th work for the date?
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The journey toward Blackfeather didn’t have to be so drawn out, but Dulce didn't mind. In fact, she preferred the time away from Kaistleoki; on her own, she could brood and sulk as much as she pleased without having to worry about judgement. What could have been accomplished in an afternoon had taken most of the day, but she would be the last to complain. 

It was warm. Not the dry, blazing heat that Dulce had grown accustomed to, but the humid, sticky warmth of the North. The reflection of a river would have normally served as an immediate pull, but she was turned off my the mental image of mosquitoes swarming just over the surface. Were it not for the faint, intriguing figure of another, she might not have approached at all. 

Taking it slow, Dulce came near enough to the lake’s edge before chuffing her greeting.