June 06, 2023, 03:51 PM
the wast flatness stretched on infinite, reaching beyond where those huddled in the mud of the wilderness dared thread. fields upon fields seeded with tough grass readying itself for the scorch of summer. a pronghorn or two, of the great migration that carried them back to their natal lands.
a shadow, ribbed and sharp-edged, prowling through the swaying grass.
she'd seen the shine of that coat, like an oddity first passed over, then returned to when the wrongness of it struck the soul. a bare spot on the downs, a bone exposed through healthy skin.
wrong, wrong, wrongness.
she prowled to where the palecoat was building a nest, malnourishment making her step weightless.
a shadow, ribbed and sharp-edged, prowling through the swaying grass.
she'd seen the shine of that coat, like an oddity first passed over, then returned to when the wrongness of it struck the soul. a bare spot on the downs, a bone exposed through healthy skin.
wrong, wrong, wrongness.
she prowled to where the palecoat was building a nest, malnourishment making her step weightless.
unreliable narrator
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dropped the ball on this one - by Medusa - May 18, 2023, 08:32 PM
RE: dropped the ball on this one - by Black Wing On The Wind - June 06, 2023, 03:51 PM
RE: dropped the ball on this one - by Eshe - June 15, 2023, 01:55 PM
RE: dropped the ball on this one - by Black Wing On The Wind - June 16, 2023, 06:41 PM
RE: dropped the ball on this one - by Eshe - July 19, 2023, 12:44 PM