August 09, 2016, 07:34 PM
Some serious pp going on. Let me know if you want me to change anything at all!
The child's distress urged Atoll out of her inquisitive state of mind - without asking, she plicked the girl out of the mud and carried her up the bank, settling herself on the ground and the child rather fussily between her paws. A low croon - almost a purr - thrummed in her chest as she began to groom the child, tongue laving gently over mud-smeared snout and then more forcfully over her dirty little paws. The peculiar damp-heat of a pup felt good and right against her chest, and she locked her paws around the girl in a gentle but unyielding grasp. Any attempts at escape would be quickly thwarted by the determined female.When the girl was as clean as Atoll's tongue could make her, her ministrations calmed somewhat, and she sought to learn about the girl once more.
"Where did you come from, little River?" she asked, eyes moving almost critically over the tiny form.
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some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Qilaq - August 09, 2016, 04:10 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Doe - August 09, 2016, 07:10 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Qilaq - August 09, 2016, 07:22 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Doe - August 09, 2016, 07:34 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Qilaq - August 09, 2016, 07:40 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Doe - August 09, 2016, 07:59 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Damien - August 09, 2016, 08:34 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Qilaq - August 09, 2016, 08:41 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Doe - August 09, 2016, 08:49 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Damien - August 09, 2016, 10:00 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Qilaq - August 09, 2016, 10:07 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Doe - August 09, 2016, 10:15 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Damien - August 09, 2016, 10:30 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Qilaq - August 09, 2016, 10:41 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Doe - August 09, 2016, 10:49 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Skellige - August 10, 2016, 02:24 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Szymon - August 10, 2016, 04:16 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Damien - August 11, 2016, 09:53 AM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Qilaq - August 11, 2016, 10:34 AM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Doe - August 11, 2016, 03:52 PM
RE: some women are lost in the fire, some women are built from it - by Skellige - August 19, 2016, 02:49 PM