Greatwater Lake every time i see you, it lets me know just how strong

it did not take long for her to move, and the first time she struck towards the water she came up with a catch.  the following attempts were less successful.  he smriks at this, chuckles lightly enough that a brief plume of fog erupts from his nose.  she moves aside and allows him to try.

he is cocky enough that he misses the first time.  his ears pin back in frustration as he dives past the ice again.  the second and third time he's calculated enough to bring up some dinner.

does this look like enough to you, or do you think we should try again?