March 09, 2019, 12:05 AM
italics are the voices in his head… hope this makes sense. I am trying to work on my mental health writing. Let me know if anything is confusing.
No matter how much he begged the phantom continued, ignoring his plea. The man hadn’t genuinely hoped that such a tactic would work, crying and begging had never helped before. They always came back. Always.
There was no amount of pleaded that made them stop, no amount of agony that made them pity his existence. Only Cassie had been able to push them away, only Cassie could make him feel better. Only her. But now even she haunted his thoughts, even she lingered in his hallucinations.
As Takiyok pushed forward, Sia stepped back. A harsh sob wrenched from his lungs in his haste, “Please Tak!” He once again firmly shut his eyes, refusing to look at her. His perception shifted, as he pictured her screaming at him. How could you!? “I didn’t mean to! The man answered just as he always did, ”I never meant to hurt you. He cried as his head dropped hanging heavy.
“What’s going on?” His sister asked, a harsh laugh ripped from his mouth, “What’s going on?!” Siarut pinned her with a harsh glare through blood shot eyes, his anger getting the better of him. ‘You’re torturing me Tak. And I don’t know how much more I can take.” He screamed at her! Surely, she could see that this constant pestering, this constant stabbing was going to end him. Surely, she could see the damage that her visiting had on him.
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As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 05, 2019, 12:06 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 07, 2019, 02:27 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 08, 2019, 09:31 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 08, 2019, 10:51 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 09, 2019, 12:05 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 09, 2019, 12:32 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 09, 2019, 12:45 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 09, 2019, 01:17 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 09, 2019, 01:34 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 09, 2019, 02:08 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 09, 2019, 02:45 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 19, 2019, 09:17 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 19, 2019, 10:18 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 19, 2019, 11:42 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - March 20, 2019, 12:03 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - March 27, 2019, 12:55 AM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - April 04, 2019, 08:54 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - April 04, 2019, 10:01 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - April 04, 2019, 10:09 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - April 04, 2019, 11:21 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - April 04, 2019, 11:30 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Takiyok - April 08, 2019, 06:47 PM
RE: As he[a righteous man] breaks, so shall it [hell] break - by Siarut - April 08, 2019, 07:03 PM
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