July 27, 2020, 08:26 AM
present tense felt fitting here. Finley’s present, but only physically, and stands a short distance from the fray; groggy unreliable narration ahoy!
Screams rip through the night; Finley is marching to the source, tensed for battle. A fight has broken out; Donovan is there. His howl beckons her to hell and hell is what she sees: two “leaders,” drenched sanguine red, Nemisis on the ground, lifeless, beheaded. At last, he’s dealt with her.
A white apparition stands in the crimson pool, speaking; unrecognizable. Colin’s voice; he backs away. The other female, her head bowed; more words, more noise. Whimpering; Derg.
Check. Check. Down the list. Renard has not drifted into awareness, if present at all. Others, if any, are no clearer than the feathered-ear healer. The show. A show? Ghastly performance.
Donovan stands, hulking, center stage. Wild eyes burn in the moonlight. He will bow, and shake his head, off with it now; away the corpse’s skull will fly, into the darkness, ripped asunder the raccoon’s leg raining blood limp little spatters on the dirt a toy a plaything goodbye—dead. Long live the queen.
Finley is static. When she wakes, this will be a nightmare.
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One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Kynareth Deagon - July 27, 2020, 03:44 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Dove - July 27, 2020, 04:20 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Colin - July 27, 2020, 05:03 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Auriel - July 27, 2020, 05:48 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Derg - July 27, 2020, 07:33 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Finley Grebe - July 27, 2020, 08:26 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Renard - July 27, 2020, 09:25 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Kynareth Deagon - July 28, 2020, 12:29 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Dove - July 28, 2020, 01:05 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Midar - July 28, 2020, 02:04 AM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Colin - July 28, 2020, 02:56 PM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Derg - August 05, 2020, 05:51 PM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Finley Grebe - August 05, 2020, 11:04 PM
RE: One more drink, one less I’ll lose - by Kynareth Deagon - August 10, 2020, 08:27 PM