Lost Creek Hollow Should I revise or rewrite

And ah, the bears would.  And cause other problems too.  The other predators were to cause a lot of problems for the Lost Creek wolves in not too long a time.  Not that Treason would know.  Instead there was a flicker of curiosity at what the next year would bring, what plans would fruit, what and who would be here, but these weren't thoughts she was going to share.

Since I will be talking to my alpha soon, is there anything else I should say to them?  Obviously, it isn't like you'd have a prepared message but...  Slight shrug.  Maybe there was something about Bearclaw that Rannoch should know?  Why hadn't they been told in the first place that they were moving from Sunspire?  Well, at least she'd have the chance to ask.  If Mona didn't have anything to add, that was fair enough too, but Treason wasn't the best of conversationalists so she suspected that otherwise things would soon draw to a close.