Moonspear hallelujah, lock and load

The mistake in his approach was clear immediately and he swallowed thickly. It was one of the most mortifying experiences to date and he wanted to lash out and defend his pride but his body reacted for him. He bowed his head and took a quick step back away from the borders glancing up to check and see if she was more pleased. The submissive response caused more anger to pool in his gut and he remained silent just staring at the woman for a moment as he waited for some kind of verbal response growing frustrated as none came. Taking a deep breath he tried again "I didn't mean to be rude, I'm sorry.  I got ahead of myself" he lowered his eyes and waited for her response, not sure how to approach now that the situation was awkward and tense. 

idk if you wanna end this to avoid too much ic mix up?